Vortex The Pretty Feedback

[pickyeater]

This thread is for the feedback for the gamebook called Vortex The Pretty, let me know your opinions and feedback, comment away!

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This game can be downloaded below...
http://www.literaturegames4all.com/vtp7e.pdf

[pickyeater]

This game was converted to the new rule style on April 4 originally, you can download this game in the original post, enjoy.

[pickyeater]

Just did a "Silent" update. in which I updated vortex's artwork, hope everyone enjoys her updated look.